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Wednesday 6 November 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi there James, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. That's an awesome picture that you made.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you spent your time making the picture and being creative with it puting your own picture in.
This reminds me of some other blogs that I have seen like this and they also have pictures. But not like yours.
To improve your work you could add a translation so everyone doesn't need to get a google translator.
How long did this take you to do?
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kind regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison, I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is an outstanding blog!
I think that it is super creative and a super cool picture, I think that this is super positive and super cool. I think that even though it is outstanding there is some room for improvement.
I think the first thing is to create an englh text box under so people from all around the world can read it and understand it and first glance. I also think you could write more about why you made this and what it is based on.
One more thing try to create your own images using shapes and lines to avoid copyright.
Kind regards,
Maddie.
Kia Ora James!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
Ka Pai! This post is amazing. I like all of the colour. The text looks very cool. The picture is great. Did you make this all by yourself? Did you enjoy making it?
I can remember having to do something like this. It was very fun. Maybe could you translate this for us?
To improve, maybe put a W.A.L.T and your thoughts and feelings about this post.
Apart from that, this was absolutely amazing!
Nga Mihi,
- Julia