It was a stormy night, I was going out to sea. I was going for my country for the war. Five hours later boom! Hurry, Hurry! Boom the blood was as crimson as a poppy. I frantically shouted to my brother. I saw my brother and he told me if I die to please tell my mum and dad that I love them.
It started to get misty and I could not see. BOOM! What was that? There was a big hole with one grave. Luke was carved on the grave, 2018 that's now, I was confused. I got shot twice.
Thursday 3 May 2018
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