for the last few weeks we have been makeing biltong's, we had one peace of meat we rubbed salt all on it then we hung it up and waited for a couple weeks then it started to get hard and dry.
When I tasted the biltong it was hard to bite and it tasted like salt.
While I grabbed the biltong it was crumbly.
Monday 16 March 2020
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Kia ora James
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing some W-Start sentences to your blog. The content and ideas in your sentences are good, but you are missing the important commas. Do you remember where these go?
I wonder if you can come up with 2 adverb start (-ly words) sentences too?
- Miss Birtch