Friday, 11 May 2018
Rata and the Waka
we have been doing some critical thinking with the story of Rata and his Waka
Thursday, 3 May 2018
Week 1 100 WC
It was a stormy night, I was going out to sea. I was going for my country for the war. Five hours later boom! Hurry, Hurry! Boom the blood was as crimson as a poppy. I frantically shouted to my brother. I saw my brother and he told me if I die to please tell my mum and dad that I love them.
It started to get misty and I could not see. BOOM! What was that? There was a big hole with one grave. Luke was carved on the grave, 2018 that's now, I was confused. I got shot twice.
It started to get misty and I could not see. BOOM! What was that? There was a big hole with one grave. Luke was carved on the grave, 2018 that's now, I was confused. I got shot twice.
Sunday, 1 April 2018
Tuesday, 27 February 2018
Thursday, 23 November 2017
Friday, 22 September 2017
Friday, 5 May 2017
somalia
Somalia
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.
Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip.
Not far off the Somali coast one of the big Vestel cargo vessels is taken over by pirates! Within a split of a second the ship has a new captain, the soup is gone as well as the cargo itself. Will our Vestrons be able to strike back?
Before you start writing think about the setting and imagine you are there.
Somali pirates take over a huge cargo freighter at sea. Things don’t look good for the crew, until the pirates start to investigate the cargo—Vestrons! Engage!
Create
WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.
- Describe the setting in detail.Think about words to describe the situation, what you see, smell, taste, hear. Try to use words that create the mood.
- Now…..Write a first person narrative through the eyes of one of the crew or one of the robots. How you are feeling when the boat is invaded by pirates.
Go to this padlet Somali and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.
Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.
Once upon a time there was a boat a old rusty bot. Pirate hopped onto the boat They were running around. the boat man was sgerd. Robot’s were chasing the pirate. Pirate’s were jumping off the boat. They surrendered.
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